Title : 빈번한 영작문 15가지 문법 오류 ④
10. Superfluous Commas (불필요한 쉼표)
It’s a typical writing mistake to throw commas around liberally when they aren’t necessary. There are dozens of examples of this error, but here are a few common mistakes. (필요하지 않을 때 쉼표를 자유롭게 사용하는 것은 일반적인 글쓰기의 오류입니다. 이 오류의 예는 수십 가지가 있지만, 여기에서는 몇 가지 흔한 오류만 다룹니다.)
Ex. The woman never went into the city, because she didn’t feel comfortable driving in traffic. (X)
→ The woman never went into the city because she didn’t feel comfortable driving in traffic.
Ex. He wants to get a degree in engineering, or medicine. (X)
→ He wants to get a degree in engineering or medicine.
Ex. Sam knew immediately, what was going to happen next. (X)
→ Same knew immediately what was going to happen next.
Ex. Old cars, that have been left in a junkyard, are an eyesore. (X)
→ Old cars that have been left in a junkyard are an eyesore.
Ex. The bouquet of flowers on the table, belongs to Mary. (X)
→ The bouquet of flowers on the table belongs to Mary.
11. Lack Of Parallel Structure(병렬 구조의 결여)
Faulty parallelism occurs when two or more parts of a sentence are similar in meaning but not parallel (or grammatically similar) in form. It often occurs with paired constructions and items in a series. (잘못된 병렬 구조는 문장의 두 개 이상 부분이 의미상 비슷하나 형식이 병렬이 아닐 때[또는 문법적으로 유사하지 않을 때] 일어납니다. 종종 쌍을 이루는 구조와 연결되는 항목 내에서 일어납니다.)
Ex. He wanted to learn more about careers in programming, engineering, biochemist, and research scientist. (X)
→ He wanted to learn more about careers in programming, engineering, biochemistry, and research science.
Ex. The key directives of his boss were clear:
- Meet monthly sales quotas.
- Aggressive marketing techniques.
- Reporting in every day. (X)
→ The key directives of his boss were clear:
- Meet monthly sales goals.
- Practice aggressive marketing techniques.
- Report in every day.
12. Sentence Sprawl (문장의 무분별 확장)
A sentence can become a burden to read when there are too many equally weighted phrases. (균등하게 가중이 된 문구가 너무 많으면 한 문장을 읽는 데 부담이 될 수 있습니다.)
Ex. Jason was planning to attend his friend’s wedding on June 30, but at the last minute he found out he had jury duty, so he couldn’t attend the wedding, and he felt really guilty about it. (X)
→ Unexpectedly Jason was called for jury duty and couldn’t attend his friend’s June 30 wedding. He felt guilty about missing it.
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